Who Poem by Robbie Squires

Who



Who says I cant get stoned?
Who says I cant kill him?
Who says I cant get drunk?
Who says I cant live sins?
Who says I cant run away?
Who says I cant leave today?
Who says ya cant be gay?
Who tells ya what to say?
Who tells ya to live your life?
Who tells ya to end it tonight?
Who tells ya who to be?
Who tells ya what to see?
Who tells ya how to live?
Who tells ya what to give?
Who says I cant get stoned?
Who tells me what to own?
Who tells me what to do?
Who tells me what to choose?
Who tells me to savor life?
Who tells me to put down the knife?
Who tells me what to achieve?
Who tells me what to believe?
Who tells me who made who?
Who tells me?
Who is who?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

That seems like a rather anarchistic life. Without boundaries, people live very hectic and often bad lifestyles. It seems like a lot of people view life like this. I'm guessing this poem is more of a commentary on the ideals of others, not on your own ideals. Cool poem either way.

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Miranda Stoltz 19 December 2009

Wow, i really like this one. Alot. Yay Robbie! Lol. (:

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