Who? ? ? ? Poem by Tracie Brown

Who? ? ? ?

Rating: 5.0


What's going on?
Who done this to you?
You really seem to be going through.

Who was it that made you cry?
Who was it that caused those Tears to flow from your Hurtful eyes?
Who was it that Criticized you?
Who was it that put you down?
Who was it that made you feel your not Worth being around?

Who Broke your Heart?
Who Broke you down?
Who said you wouldn't make it this time around?
Who Spoke Hurting Words to you?
Who said you are Trash?
Who is it that keeps bringing up your Past?

Who was it that said you are a failure and need to give up on Life
Who tried to buy your Love with a Price?
Who was it that made you feel a Shame?
Who was it that Spread Rumors
Trying to Ruining your Name?

Who was it that wounded you?
Who was it that Used you
with no intentions on ever Loving you?
Who was it that Judge mentally Labeled you?
Whose this person that's against you?

Who made you feel like you couldn't Be You?
Whose the person that's trying to Destroy the Greatness in you?
Whose this person that caused you to build up Walls in the inside of you?
Who was this person that Abandon you?

Whose this person that Rejected you?
Who was it that thought it was OK to Neglect you?
Whose the person that caused you so much Pain?
Who was it that caused you to make a unfortunate Change?

Who was it that Broke your Trust?
Who was it that made you say 'Enough is Enough'! ! ! !
Who was it that left you Internally Bleeding?
Who is this person you Blamed for leaving?

Who was it that left you Emotionally Damaged?
Whose the person that left you not even able to Manage?
Whose the person that has you walking around with Low Self-Esteem?
Who was it that Killed all your Dreams?

Who was it that left you in the Middle of the Storm?
Whose the person that has caused you to write this Sad Poem?
Who was it that Crippled you when you needed them the most?
Who was this person that fall asleep on there Post?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Mueller 22 February 2007

much better ending than before, good choice of words, good job - heather

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Ronald Stroman 22 February 2007

A piece of Poetic art for mind. You Slammed that on the poetic table, and my eyes got an appetite for the Poetic menu.

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Heather Mueller 22 February 2007

Love the poem Tracie. Just a few things, make sure that you try to end your poems a little better. As i was reading this i found myself locked but when the end came it was a little weak. However it is a great start. Keep writing and i'll keep reading! -Heather

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