Who Am I? Poem by Jordan Everly

Who Am I?



Who are you
to say im fat?
Who am I
to say you're wrong?

Who are you
to say im ugly?
Who am I
to say you're wrong?

Who are you
to say ill live?
Who am i
to take my own life?

Should i take
the part of god
and end this life
thats gone on to long?

Should i take
the part of god
and tighten my finger
to hear the sound of the gap?

BANG!
DANG!
Im still here
i can feel the blood trickle
right down my spine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Will P. Litter 11 April 2008

Feels like hurts. Kind of slowly paced too.

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Jordan Everly

Jordan Everly

Iowa City, Iowa
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