Jordan Everly

Rookie (July 1,1992 -? ? / Iowa City, Iowa)

Who Am I? - Poem by Jordan Everly

Who are you
to say im fat?
Who am I
to say you're wrong?

Who are you
to say im ugly?
Who am I
to say you're wrong?

Who are you
to say ill live?
Who am i
to take my own life?

Should i take
the part of god
and end this life
thats gone on to long?

Should i take
the part of god
and tighten my finger
to hear the sound of the gap?

BANG!
DANG!
Im still here
i can feel the blood trickle
right down my spine


Comments about Who Am I? by Jordan Everly

  • (4/11/2008 2:38:00 PM)


    Feels like hurts. Kind of slowly paced too. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 11, 2008



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