andres mendoza


Who Am I - Poem by andres mendoza

Today's just an ordinary day,
Walk in a big crowd and i start shaking,
Touch me and I swear you'll end up dazed,
Don't mess with me I don't play,
I will slam you're skull till it starts breaking.

I sensed his presence so I left,
No matter how much i try I still see blood,
So many homicidal thoughts rush in my head,
I stop to see someone dead,
I look in front of me.... I see the word's 'red rum'.

You asked who am I,
I'm just a psycho looking for help,
I'm a psycho with one thing in my mind,
And that's homicide,
Who am I it's hard to tell.


Comments about Who Am I by andres mendoza

  • Andres Mendoza (9/18/2012 1:14:00 PM)


    All i need is my wife. But she can barely help. She only controls my problem, I don't know how to say it but every time I'm having a psychotic episode she always makes the shadows, voices thought's and every thing go away. (Report) Reply

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  • Adeline Foster (9/17/2012 4:02:00 PM)


    Really sounds like you need a friend. Read mine - I have Delighted -
    Adeline
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  • Andres Mendoza (8/25/2012 11:12:00 AM)


    Not many would understand what I'm going through. You would have to get deep in my mind to figure out what's wrong. But then again most people just decide to label me as a freak, a monster. Then they would just do their best to stay away from me. It's just the affect i got on some people. (Report) Reply

  • Bethany Buhl (8/17/2012 6:58:00 PM)


    Sounds like I don't want to be on the same street as you. I wonder why you seem so pissed off and makes you seem scary. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 17, 2012



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