Who Am I From The Past? Poem by daniel kim

Who Am I From The Past?

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Descriptions of such rebuking yells and ringing sounds,
from behind the walls of difficult pounds,
the gray hues of lifeless skies,
to fallen tears as wrecking bys.

Concerning the walk,
of how my life has been fed,
carrying on with reckless reflects,
creating this rage outshining the faults,
from the past,
who am i?

If without a trace,
question with fallen sights,
to my nearest eyes till years has given back,
evading my being from voices of condemning shouts,
then today as i perform my question who am i?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 26 September 2009

Now this is something, and you will come out better in the future, as you work on yourself presently. Well done.

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buenos aires, argentina
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