Who Are You..? Poem by Tanchanok Manokam

Who Are You..?

Rating: 3.8


You fascinated me at first sight.
Your face's perfect. Your scent's so fine.
You hypnotized me at first sight.
You tempt my heart. You charm my mind.

Who are you? ... beautiful boy

Sweet nights, so long, the moon beam.
Lovely stars, full of sky.
I always see you in my dream.
I can't control. I don't know why.

Who are you? ... mysterious boy

You’re so unbelively handsome.
Maybe.. You may be an angel.
You’re so impossibly handsome.
Angel.. I'm under your spell.

Who are you? ... glamorous boy

Or if you're wicked dark bogey.
I don't interest and be afraid.
I'll give you my soul and body.
I won't hesitate and regret.

Who are you? ... indifferent boy

In the great ball, I saw masked crowd.
They're so bright. Everything's all right.
Music started, they danced around.
Then I gape.. Who's that gorgeous guy?

Who are you? ... attractive boy

That guy walked to me, then he halted.
He said 'Dance with me' I'm so shy.
His eyes pierced my heart and see all.
Take your mask off, show me, don't hide.

Who are you? ... marvellous boy

Oh.. Moonlit night, sky's so far.
Moon and wind, please tell me. I pray.
Oh.. Boy, if I know who you are.
I won't let you go, no no way.

Who are you? ... fabulous boy

If it is possible, I want...
You're my bodyguard, protect me.
Beside me, only me, I'm fond...
Watch me. Do them. They're your duty.

Who are you? ... courageous boy

Now.. I'm fearing, so dread. You'll flirt
other girls. I fear to lose you.
If you're fond other girls, I'll hurt.
I'll feel like dying, sorrowful.

Who are you? ... I like you, boy

I like you, only you. It's true.
All your everything bewitch me.
My heart's head over heels love you.
I need your heart mine, only me.

Who are you? ... I love you, boy

Please show me, tell me, don't make me crazy.


Who are you ...



^_^ Hello! everybody I'm a Thai girl. This my first English poem. I try to train many way that make me good in English. And writing poem is a way in them that be so funny. ha ha.. I used to like to write poem very much when I was young, but they're Thai poems. I'm not sure in grammar, Every reader, please suggest and teach me for my improvement.... Thank you!

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blank blank 04 December 2009

thanks for commenting on mine...

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Daniel Kempson 29 November 2009

Welcome to PH young lady and a fine start, a good poem and don't worry time will help you in your grasp of English 10 Daniel

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Pink Butterfly ... 29 November 2009

This one is good! Pls. continue writing... That's a gift you should treasure! There is always room for improvement. Don't worry, as time goes by, for sure you'll learn a lot...Just remain being a poet. God bless you! -Pink Butterfly-

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