! ! Who Dare To Save Me Poem by John G. Nelson

! ! Who Dare To Save Me



The love of a woman is killing me.
My heart is inflamed, it is craving.
poisoned by a potion of sweet love,
and blinded by sweet lips & kisses,
who dare to save me?

I’m entraped in a cave, deep under,
Entangle in webs of sweet influence
Of love which lay snares & beams.
I Baffled love, I do not comprehend,
rustling in its memories & mysteries..

My heart rises for the unknown.
Something deepen then the ocean
And as Stronger as first love, that
caged my mind in the wilderness,
Cloud me with doubts day & night.

How I wish to undo these spells
Unlock my heart from these bondages.
And how strong, these radiance of love,
And how mighty those glorous eyes.
Who dare to save me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

A nice emotional composition.

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Mamie Free 01 September 2008

The best ever! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! want to know why? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? it's reall youuuuu. well done! ! ! ! ! ! ! great penning.......

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Tanya Stanford 26 August 2008

Sadly only you can save yourself. I am such a fan of your work. Lovely use of words.

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John G. Nelson

John G. Nelson

Monrovia, Liberia
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