Why? Poem by Viviann Gaus

Why?



Why am i just a kid?
is it love that i feel for him?
In my heart i know he wont care,
for i am wrong for him.
we love all the same bands but,
not the same everything.
Why?

Why wont he notice it?
the void he fills in my heart?
the way that when he laughs,
everything seems perfect.
the way he walk me too my classroom,
never dreading to be late.
Why doent he love me too?
Why?



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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Taylor Harding 20 September 2011

wow that is how i feel about a guy it is great that poem it sghow deep emotions

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Izuoma Ibe 09 September 2011

Good job. But I also as Why? Why what? Why wont hearts recognize sincere hearts andidentify with them, instead of following that which give immediate satisfaction and long-term deficit. Well crafted! !

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