Friday, September 9, 2011

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Why am i just a kid?
is it love that i feel for him?
In my heart i know he wont care,
for i am wrong for him.
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Viviann Gaus
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Taylor Harding 20 September 2011

wow that is how i feel about a guy it is great that poem it sghow deep emotions

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Izuoma Ibe 09 September 2011

Good job. But I also as Why? Why what? Why wont hearts recognize sincere hearts andidentify with them, instead of following that which give immediate satisfaction and long-term deficit. Well crafted! !

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