Sunday, August 17, 2008

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I can’t believe this is happening,
To a man such as yourself,
You used to be so strong and fun,
You used to care so much it hurt.
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Claudia Krizay 28 October 2011

A lot of feeling in this poem- a hard situation to live through- hope you got through it and that things are better now. Keep writing- it is a good outlet, to make something well created out of a painful situation- CK.

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Bud Kevin 17 August 2008

Hi Angel, I could see the hardship you are going thru. Stand firm and keep on believing yourself, you can overcome ths situations. If possible, talk to other people around you and gain support to you and your family. Cheer up and keep on writing.

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