dalton lakin

Why

why do i! !
why do i go back
why do i stay?
why do i always go back?
i know i love her she loves me to!
She hurts me
she loves me
why does she hurt me?
why does she do this to me?
why cant she stop?
why cant she treat me like im a person?
why is my question? ?
why is what im wondering
why does she say she loves me
i know she does
why does she hurt me
why why why? ! ? ! ? ! ?

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 28, 2009

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Comments about Why by dalton lakin

  • Eveline Mendes (12/3/2009 2:02:00 PM)

    okay...i xpected dz to be typically sentimental bt readin it u sense his pain...and i think for a man to xpression dt sort of emotion and mke it felt...trully hurts u as a reader... great words dude.

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  • Nesa S (5/25/2009 5:32:00 PM)

    i know how you feel. i've been there, too. It is always painful when someone hurts you and breaks your heart. I give this a +++10+++. Great Job! ! !

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  • Adeline FosterAdeline Foster (4/17/2009 1:16:00 PM)

    Ah! The question-read on and find some answers. Wish you the best.
    Adeline

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