why do i bother
when they don't care
why do i suffer
if life isn't fair
why do we dream
if they never come true
why do i live
live without you
wow that was something, u really dont need any improvments, your poems rock! !
There are no improvements needed. I thought it was great!
I enjoyed reading your poem angel of suicide; it doesn't matter what others think when you love and feel what you write in my opinion. ~Kristy~
all Poets improve on their creations. your poem was poetically fine to me. i'm not expert. take care.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That was aewsome. that is exactly what i have been asking myself for the longest and u know i still don't have any answer's