Friday, June 17, 2011

Why Do I Love You So Much? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do I love you so much?
It’s not just your eyes, the tranquil lake of heaven,
Nor your eyebrows, the elegant stroke of Vinci,
Nor your mouth, Michelangelo’s masterpiece.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 June 2011

This is really a nice work. I like it for its vivid imagery and skilful description. Lots of love. A fine 10. If you don't mind, pleas read and rate my poem 'A busy street on page 1.

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