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Why Do You Ask Why I Love You?

Why do you ask why I love you?
You are the lovliest rose in heaven's garden, have been for a while.
The sweetest girl I've ever stumbled into,
I love you for you, and your eyes and your smile.

Your hair, so radiant and red,
Your smile, so perfect and white.
I love you for you, I've plainly said.
Your beauty overwhelms me, even in the dead of night.
Yet you still doubt me, still so unsure.
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Brandy Mclemore 20 January 2006
Amazing, Aj. When I heard this in class I was blown away, I didn't know that you were so good at writing poems. Your way better then anyone I know at writing (well not Marilyn Manson) . talk to you later! Brandy
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Neisha Williams 20 January 2006
Aj, I really like this poem. It's sweet without being overly mushy. It sounds close to something a real person might say. I especially like the end of the second line, where you pause before adding, 'have been for a while.' It almost sounds like something you'd say under your breath or in your head while you're talking to the object of your obvious affection-like something you may be afraid to say out loud because you don't want to overwhelm her. Still, this is a great poem. Definitely and 'A.'
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nikki Davis 20 January 2006
your poem is one of the best poems theat i have read in a long time. dont ever stop writting. nikki
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