Tuesday, December 12, 2017

Why Does Pain Exist? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do I have to feel this way
I shouldn't have this
when I shouldn't have you
How I wish it was just a dream
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annie manzano
COMMENTS
Bernard F. Asuncion 13 December 2017

Annie, such a fine poem...a huge 10+++

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Greg Satler 13 December 2017

A poem that asks pertinent question.

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Rajendra Rout 13 December 2017

it was a very beautiful poem.thanks for shairing

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Annie Manzano 13 December 2017

Thanks for reading Mr. Rajendra :)

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Bernard 13 December 2017

I think your poem is not yet finish ed can you continue this? :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Annie m. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Annie Manzano 13 December 2017

Thanks for dropping by Jazib Kamalvi. Yeah sure!

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