Delwen Doyle

Rookie (Irrelevant / Planet Earth)

Why Is It U Like Me? - Poem by Delwen Doyle

Why is it U like me?
i do not know.
My chapped lips?
My wide hips?
My sweaty palms?
Your gorgeous face
makes mine blush
When you say such sweet words -
i don't understand U.
i'm square and care
about the nerdiest of things
Ur hip, & cool,
& make my heart sing.


Comments about Why Is It U Like Me? by Delwen Doyle

  • (5/6/2008 1:50:00 PM)


    Lots of crispy sweetness here, You have a remarkable approach to writing..your flow of words and imagery is of brilliance..great stuff! ! ! !


    best wishes
    Jon
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  • (5/5/2008 7:59:00 AM)


    heheh...i really like, very interesting, and i love the square reference. Really cool, I'm starting to dig your stuff alot, glad i found ya. (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2008 3:27:00 AM)


    Cos U is U on the inside too
    Dat is why he so likes you....

    Crisp and concise. Nice one.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2008



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