Sunday, November 22, 2009

Why Oh Why...Can'T I? Comments

Rating: 5.0

She put her
hand in my hand

gave me
...
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Dónall Dempsey
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Onelia Avelar 27 November 2009

...but her heart was an horizon a tantalising rainbow always just out of reach... wonderful metaphors for the heart out of reach - somewhere between Earth and sky like an horzon or rainbow. I add this poem to my favorites...

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Siddharth Singh 23 November 2009

A remarkable piece really. Love eludes you even though you appear to be in posession of it. Voted 10.

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Ruth Walters 22 November 2009

she hesitated over giving you her heart for just a moment...... perhaps in another second she would have been more assured.... Ruthie: o)

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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