Monday, July 14, 2008

Why The Strong Man Cries Comments

Rating: 4.5

Patiently watching and waiting as the sky dies
away into the world I come again to fly
as today's tomorrow I will try
to fight inch by inch to get to you
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Lance K...
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Katii Stacy 20 October 2008

your poems are really nice...this ones my favorite

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Amie-Lee ...... 24 July 2008

I love this poem, and I agree, even the worlds strongest man will cry if they're provoked in the correct way Thank-you so much for sharing this wonderful piece of your mind Amie-Lee: -)

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Colin Jeffery 15 July 2008

Good poem - well composed.

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Marvin Brato 14 July 2008

I agree that no man even the strongest can stand to hold his tears when his love breaks.... much more when it was caused by his own wrong doing! High marks.

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