Thursday, May 1, 2014

Wilderness Comments

Rating: 4.0

A rabbit’s hole a landmine set to blow,
twigs are prodding bayonets that force “GO”.

Plastic bottles are mortar rounds fired,
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Robbie Brereton
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Colleen Courtney 02 May 2014

I llike this poem. I like how it compares the beauty of all things found in nature and compares them to the atrocious ugly implements of war. Very nicely written.

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