James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Monday, August 6, 2018

Wildwood # 1 Comments

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Is a secret dark place in southern Saint Petersburg.
In a dark cave weary and weak of life some are.
From the streets to here rabid like dog's the one's traumatized
Shake from the noise trapped in a dream most are.
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Bri Edwards 24 October 2018

now to read the series. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 08 August 2018

OK! My trick worked according to my record of comments 'Sent'. bri ;) have a nice whatever!

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Bri Edwards 08 August 2018

i like this one, quite a bit, though less so than Lost In The Mist Is The Sea, which i think i understood better. Or maybe i didn't understand better? i like both and both go to MyPoemList. i like the alliteration weary and weak. here is the part i THINK i understand completely, ...UNLESS it is some kind of symbolism; (i do not 'get' symbolism, usually) .: But for now Summer's here and it's unbearably hot for me and the flies are A blight to the flesh......poor James! bri ;)

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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