Will Time Heal Me? Poem by June FeirCruz

Will Time Heal Me?



A wise man told me 'time heals' just be patient
Though in my heart I know that he is right.
Still, at the moment I just want for the tears to fall
Hoping it would wash all the pain and anger away.

I had given all that I have and more
Still it was not enough.
You have a thirst that I cannot quench
Even when I pour all my soul to this cup.

I did not know that I had a debt to pay
I thought I had paid with all that I have got and more
My precious time, my love, my affection and my soul
Meant nothing to you at all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Les Derbyshire 23 July 2009

The theme is a classic one and you have, as ever, approached it with sensitivity and awareness. The idea of tears as cleansing, healing, is one I've used myself and I love the way you have introduced it here. Thanks for this lovely piece June.

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