Willingness Poem by Little Red Apple

Willingness

Rating: 5.0


This hard rain
The reflection of my heart
Crying so hardly
So loudly..
No one knows
No one cares
Cannot be stopped

Sometimes,
Your words're like papers in the winter hurting my heart
As a knife that slices my heart into pieces
Don't you know?
Do you never realize?

Though..
I know already
Sooner I will hear your sweet voice again
Hearing you say that you love me
That our love will last forever and even beyond
I know that time will greet me more beautifully

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 30 November 2008

I find here a loving heart hopeful and confident, a bit complaining though...a talking love poem...well written...good work, Little...10

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