Tuesday, April 24, 2007

Willow Why Do You Weep Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I watch from my window sill
and look bryond the rolling hills
My thoughts travel to a place and time
Where my heart heaves sublime
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JoAnn McGrath
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Theresa Moore 07 September 2007

I like the way you express human emotion through the characteristics of a Willow tree. Best of all, I loved the way the poem gave hope. Sometimes spirits can lifted by positive praise from an onlooker. The last line was wonderful. '10'

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Kimberly Kastner 24 April 2007

This is a beautifully written poem, JoJo. I have given it a 10.

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Marci Made 24 April 2007

I love weeping willow trees, they we're fun to picnic under when very young. Dang they sure could do a job on peoples pipes though. Good poem. Had never thought of them as sad before, but good write and now I've learned something new. Trying to watch AI here and read and write at same time.marci

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