Bianca Free

Wilted Rose - Poem by Bianca Free

My mood swings fairly high
Then hangs unbearably low
Each time, leaving me to feel like a wilting rose
That is at first so red and gay;
A prize to be won,
But transitions to be so limp and gray,
Denied by even heaven.

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Comments about Wilted Rose by Bianca Free

  • (12/19/2011 2:24:00 PM)

    I am sorry you feel this way, but the poem does not give reasons why this feeling, though you put it in a poeyic way, I may say.

    I think you did fairly well here even though I would have liked the poem to be a bit more, but this is my taste only; others might think differently.

    By the way, I have a book of poems out called, 'Simply My Mind.' If you like a copy, go to and type the name oif the book or my name, Luis Estable and you will see. Would you please pass the word around?

    Take care now and keep on wriitng.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 19, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 20, 2011

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