Thursday, July 30, 2009

Wind Bell Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's quite sad
I observed,
When there's wind
You make a melancholy note
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 31 July 2009

Your ever fertile imagination produces poems out of the air. This one reminds us that silence can so easily be turned into cacophony at the slightest provocation. I like the clown you reveal here, Nimal. I can see him, replete with his red nose and baggy pants, often in your poems. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 30 July 2009

Your fragile wind bell is a beautiful metaphor for hidden tears. You give yourself away in words very effectively. This is the mark of a true poet. Take care. Always your friend at poemhuner, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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