Wednesday, October 24, 2007

Window Box Comments

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I put you in my window box
Where my sun meets earth at dusk
And fair pistils of your hair
Unabated by the scorch
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Tracy Galloway
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Chris Mendros 24 October 2007

i detect an analogy here, but not really able to guess much more. The images are definitely strong and sure, tho, and there's no doubt this is a very good poem. Nice work.

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Tracy Galloway

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