Winter Comes Poem by Erlend Kaldaaga Madsen

Winter Comes

Rating: 4.5


the dimming sun
reaching its arms of light

truth be told
winter comes
another depression sold

essence of sadness
dripping
over desert fields
where once grew green
with joy

angels smiling, kissing cheeks
on building stones of old

the people on the other side
knowingly let go

of summer, love
and happiness

no more lawn to mow.

Monday, December 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 January 2016

A well articulated piece of poetry, insightful penned in poetic diction from heart with conviction. An encapsulated depiction of decadence into low ebb of life, occasioned by the unpleasant presence of depressive winter. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Erlend. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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