Winter Garden Poem by Janaki Nilmini

Winter Garden

Rating: 4.8


After the grande finale
Resting like dormant
Stage is empty
But, is it?
Not quite

Some matted leaves
On, still green grass
Some autumn sheds
Colourful as ever
Make a pretty painting

Skeleton bushes
Brown conifer brushes
Invite song thrushes
Where the spider rushes

Wood pigeon still scratches
Nuts, the squirrel yet hides
And magpie treasure hunts
Winter garden, neither empty
Nor dormant
Not quite

Sunday, November 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Winter garden
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhilasha Bhatt 27 November 2016

Amazing creation....tremendous....love it :)

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Janaki Nilmini 30 November 2016

Thank you Abhilasha, much appreciated.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 27 November 2016

Wonderfully painted beauty of nature's magnificent winter. Every incident has something to look at and entice to enjoy. Excellent thinking. Thanks for sharing.

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Janaki Nilmini 30 November 2016

Your comments are much appreciated, many thanks.

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Chinedu Dike 27 November 2016

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely in good diction with conviction. A lovely depiction of winter season. Thanks for sharing Janaki.

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Janaki Nilmini 01 December 2016

Thank you Chinedu, your feedback is much appreciated.

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