Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Winter Night Comments

Rating: 3.5

The moon reflects upon the snow,
As I tremble head to toe
The cold bites without end,
As I search for a friend
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Allan T. Muir
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Pamela Sinicrope 23 September 2015

I like the winter metaphor... It works both literally and figuratively! Well done!

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 23 September 2015

loneliness of life well expressed-well done

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