Winter Night Poem by Akshita Bindal

Winter Night

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Don't ask me about the winter night
There were stars and moon, was light
There were shivers, trembles and the frostbites
Even a single matchstick produced warmth and heat

Don't ask me about winter night
There were dark creatures caressing beauty and polite
They hide there fury and craved to sleep those nights
Too much light that star was warm and they removed all light
Storm came to evoke pleasure and help them to ride

But those were white winter nights
Where the blues were tuned to hues of white
For greens the light has to put up a fight

Saturday, May 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dark blue,fight,fire,light,night,star,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 26 May 2018

a single matchstick produced warmth and heat Storm came to evoke pleasure Where the blues were tuned to hues of white. very symbolic, light, night, winter, very fine poem. thank u. tony

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Akshita 27 May 2018

Thank you so much that's a pleasure that you caught one of the key in the poem. It is really motivating for me. Thank you Dr. Tony Brahmin

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 May 2018

Hi Akshata, Beautiful poem. On the wonders of winter, I hope a North Indian winter. You concluding line, (In winter nights) For greens, the light has to put up a fight. Wow! Loved this one. Wonderful expression, fantastic imagery. And the rhyme.Your innate talent is manifest here. Great. Continue writing. A 10++++ and onto MyPoemList.

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Akshita 27 May 2018

Thank you so much for inspiring.

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