Wise as can be
The future I cannot see
Many friends have come
This many turned to some
From experiences I have grown
And harden like a stone
Wise as can be
Still nothings clear to me
Older then yesterday
Though looks have gone away
These sounds I hear are in my mind
A speaker that I can not find
Wise as can be
My eyes are closed to me
Turning from skin to dust
Your touch was a must
Those feelings have gone away
Just a faint dream of yesterday
Wise as can be
My past I cannot see
Thomas... Tis an Erudite right you present here... and also to be taken from the smiling Tai below! ! ! I too add to the PH Welcome... and aroha, Deana
Certainly as wise as can be Thomas! If you are twenty, experience is something you can only gain with time and pain, as with writing poetry. The end of rhymes were kind of pounding to the ears...which is the youth in you, but it was a good first poem to read. Tai's best wise move to pass on to you here is, NEVER go near the forum again! lol And I mean that most sicknearly from the experience. Otherwise it is not a bad place, best bit is that it is free and the worst is that there is no freedom in poetic speech! Censors never rest here. Oh! and the advertising rather dominates, but not as sacrilegiously as did not so long ago. Smiling at you Tai
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is very beautiful..smartly done..this will go to my fav.