Wisdom With Age Comments

this is very beautiful..smartly done..this will go to my fav.

Thomas... Tis an Erudite right you present here... and also to be taken from the smiling Tai below! ! ! I too add to the PH Welcome... and aroha, Deana

Certainly as wise as can be Thomas! If you are twenty, experience is something you can only gain with time and pain, as with writing poetry. The end of rhymes were kind of pounding to the ears...which is the youth in you, but it was a good first poem to read. Tai's best wise move to pass on to you here is, NEVER go near the forum again! lol And I mean that most sicknearly from the experience. Otherwise it is not a bad place, best bit is that it is free and the worst is that there is no freedom in poetic speech! Censors never rest here. Oh! and the advertising rather dominates, but not as sacrilegiously as did not so long ago. Smiling at you Tai