Rebecca Succes

Rookie - 86 Points (march 7 1987 / brooklyn)

Wish You Were Dead - Poem by Rebecca Succes

wish you were dead

my life would be more happy

l can do what l want

say what l want to say

do me

wish you were dead

no complaining

no lie

no making my life a living hell

wish you were dead

my emotions wouldn't be damaged

my attitude would be better

my mind would be focused

wish you were dead

wish you were dead

wish you were dead

l forget you are dead

l stand at your tombstone

throw flowers on your grave

and say l'm sorry l killed you

but you left me no choice.


Comments about Wish You Were Dead by Rebecca Succes

  • (7/13/2016 6:49:00 AM)


    So how come you didntblet a man die in 2013 ? (Report) Reply

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  • (12/24/2011 3:58:00 PM)


    Wish you were dead..flashes deep mood of frustration received from a lover or loved ones, the poem is well organised, keep it up Rebacca (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/24/2011 1:32:00 PM)


    The twist in this poem is beautiful/ good write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bethany Buhl (12/24/2011 10:55:00 AM)


    This is very interesting. I like how you put a little twist in the end of the poem. I thought it was gonna go somewhere is when I first read the first couple of lines, but I love how you ended the poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 24, 2011



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