Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Wishes/Dreams Comments

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Everytime i close my eyes i see stars
It's like being on mars
I wished for you in my dream one night
And to my surprise, there you were in the light
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Atlantic Shay
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Atlanta Donbavand 29 November 2012

Thanks for all the comments: D Pleased you liked it

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Asif Andalib 29 November 2012

Short, simple and lovely write. I liked it

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Somanathan Iyer 28 November 2012

Nice imaginations. Thanks for a good poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 November 2012

Good poem. Imagine what could happen if we could fly. Thanks. High dreams.

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