Thursday, November 17, 2016

With Pliers, Saw, Tongs And A Hammer Comments

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It's not like I am going to straighten,
A molten piece of metal like this bangle,
I wear on my arm. It is truth that I am,
Going to knock sense into this poem,
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Sarah Mkhonza
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Kim Barney 17 November 2016

An interesting take on the construction of a poem. I like your imagination and the way you expressed it here. Very well done.

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