With The Flow Poem by Nancy Nalbandian

With The Flow

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He thought he left me in a meadow
Singing and dancing with the daffodils
And going with the flow
But what he did is left me in ruins.
My condition may avail him
For he is a man of mind,
Flinches as the wind blows
And love seems to be a peril.
Run, my love, run
And embrace the daffodils
Instead of me-
Because if you thought they are mine
Let me tell you that they are far away from my reach.

Sunday, September 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Lacovara 24 September 2017

Well done! Written with an honest pen.

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Nancy Nalbandian 25 September 2017

Thank youuu :) Poetry is the sole means of honesty nowadays.

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Susan Lacovara 24 September 2017

Well done, written with an honest pen!

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