gabs yordan


Without Hope - Poem by gabs yordan

abandon hope to all who come
it is gone it is gone
to me hope is no more than a thred

for those who are crule
they come to sought
that one hopethat one thought
thats my only thred

its cut its gone my hope is gone
i cant do more i try and try
my treds been cut and so have i

and now you see what you have done
you have cut my thred and wronged my won

its hard to trust those around
when my thred is just hanging barly above the ground


Comments about Without Hope by gabs yordan

  • (4/21/2010 8:21:00 PM)


    I think your poem evokes a emotion in me that i always try to let out but am alittle afraid to, so i thank you for saying some things in rhyme and helping me say it... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 21, 2010



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