Monday, November 19, 2018

Without Respite Comments

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The wanting lingered without respite
an intruder that cared not
for the mercies of a staid life
away from the passions on my mind
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Sean Green
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 03 January 2020

The heart wants to go where the mind refuses to follow. I love the last line as it fits the message of the poem perfectly.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 November 2018

Sean, such a marvelous poem.............

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Gajanan Mishra 19 November 2018

Dreams walk upright, good write

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Sean Green 19 November 2018

Thank you for the kind feedback!

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