Without You Poem by jitesh shah

Without You

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Without Mother Any partial world,

Aimless life without Water,

Incomplete tal without a tune,

Incomplete a shadow without a tree,

Without Jupiter incomplete knowledge,

Without flowers fragrant incomplete,

incomplete poem without the poet …

Wednesday, May 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: social
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
there are not complite life without support
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2015

Yes, that is so true, without support from others our lives cannot be fully complete, we will always feel that something is missing and we will crave it through life. Very thoughtful concept, a poet of exceptional talent. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Of fourse the personality of the poet is seen in lines.

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jitesh shah

jitesh shah

Ahmedabad, Gujarat, India
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