Without You Poem by Sarah L. Johnsen

Without You

Rating: 5.0


I hear a moaning in the breeze
And search for answers in the clouds
As I drift among the tallest trees
Or wander lone in busy crowds.

Words and laughter, time is swirled
And people seem so far away.
I live in my quiet world
And in a dream I pass the day.

If I should wake, the agony
Will return and rip my heart.
There is no other remedy.
In my dream we're not apart.

I dream until I fade away.
Must I live another day?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Cullinan 21 March 2005

These excellent poems are well constructed and show a great deal of sensitivity. Well done, indeed!

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Andrew Jones 17 January 2005

Wow, that was touching indeed. Nicely done

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Terry Donovan 01 November 2004

That's beautiful poetry. I'm sorry about the circumstances which led you to writing it, but you did your subjecy every justice.

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Deanna Fernandez 24 September 2004

i love this poem it touches the way i feel and us parents that lost our children.we feel this way.

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Sarah L. Johnsen

Sarah L. Johnsen

New Haven, Connecticut
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