Words Of War Poem by Braja K Sarkar

Words Of War

Rating: 5.0


I have drawn numerous lifelines
On the shore of time.

I faught thousands of wars,
More and more battles
I have never win!
My wounds are getting old,
They are still bleeding

I draw the borderlines of my skies.
But time and again
The dark clouds cast their shadows on
The History of time.

There is nothing remains
But the wounds of life
And words of war...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malini Kadir 01 June 2010

I realize a deep soul slumbers here, On the shores of time, ...............' for only the ripe fruit will stones invite' and pray tell me where is the sweetness in the green fruit?

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 December 2009

Excellent poem... please write more… '...There is nothing remains // But the wounds of life // And words of war..’ Very touchy and relevant… Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK.

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Marieta Maglas 26 August 2009

nice conceptual metaphor: ''I have drawn numerous lifelines On the shore of time'' wonderful symbolistical poem....10+++

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