World Poem by Sarah Nugent

World

Rating: 5.0


world let the people breath
let them have the strength to live
to live their life without difficulty
let the sun shine down onto the people
who need it the most
let love take flight on young lovers
who have yet to learn by their mistakes
let them not have to feel pain
the way I have to.......
let young children be watched
by the angels above
let adults pick themselves up
and try again to make themselves better
let the people who are struggling
to figure out their problems

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poison 9901 07 October 2007

Very nice Sarah, and very well written. I especially like the verse that states 'let love take flight on young lovers who have yet to learn by their mistakes' Life is full of mistakes, the only thing that we can hope for is that we learn from them. Again, very well written and stated as if to be a prayer. I give you a 10 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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