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Worse Verse

Rating: 4.3

This rhyming gives me so much grief
Like something rapping in the head,
And what I would say can’t be said:
The metre beggars all belief.

Is it that I should start afresh
With something else? Yes, that might do.
New style and meaning could ring true
If rhyme and rhythm would enmesh.

Yet still the clumsiest words remain
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Raynette Eitel 15 October 2005

Gol, it is funny but when I saw the title on this poem, I knew it had to be yours. Who says we don't know one another here on PH? This poem hits a note with those of us who try to perfect rhyme and metre...and you did it well. Raynette

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