Would It Make A Difference? Comments

One line makes this special for me - And my shoulders do the same this tells me you have the observational skills of a poet. This sets you a step apart in my eyes. You seem also, from the three poems so far, to have a natural sense of rhythm in your writing. I am intrigued. Please keep writing.

Your a greater writer, you should be proud.(:

I love this! :) It's so good, keep it up :)