Echo of the forest

Wrapped In My Gaze - Poem by Echo of the forest

She was dressed solely in my gaze
wrapped in it
and she asked me: how do I look? does it fit me?
my neighbours gaze was a bit too tight
they were seeing me like a child
so I took it down
and layed it on the floor
like a venison
that can do nothing more but sniff my feet

your gaze makes me feel like a woman,
the only diver's suit in which I can breath outside my chambers,
that is how I came here
the eyes of the bypassers became steps
lifting me, bringing me down
even more than usual
I was slipping on the mens gaze like on a sleighing
the women didn't want to see nothing more than an empty glass
but I am like a full Moon,
like a soft Moon...

Topic(s) of this poem: love, sensual

Form: Blank Verse

Poet's Notes about The Poem

photo by Alireza Shahhamzeh

Comments about Wrapped In My Gaze by Echo of the forest

  • Elena Sandu (2/2/2016 6:39:00 AM)

    Fantastic gem, your poetry, Alexandru, is a most gorgeous piece of art! Music, painting and motion all in one to ease the reader's soul with a glass of love, a drop of play and even the whispers of a neighbour's voice. Excellent penning, thank you for share! (Report) Reply

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  • Echo Of The Forest (1/21/2016 10:20:00 AM)

    Thank you very much sir Waseem Sherif. I am most honoured by your impression and very glad that my poem has reached your soul giving birth to such gentle feelings. Hope you will continue reading my poems :) (Report) Reply

  • (1/20/2016 3:46:00 PM)

    your poem is wrapped in beautiful imagery and delivers silky and soft feelings.
    thanks for sharing and welcome to poemhunter.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 20, 2016

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