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Written Reason - Poem by Landrey

get it out. get it over with.
let them know. let them look amiff.
what I wrote-it is what I feel.
understand: you're not past the peal.
only I know just the flavor.
simply I can fully savor.
you enjoy: even though it's small.
cuz' guess what? ? there's pits in 'em all.

Comments about Written Reason by Landrey

  • (12/6/2006 1:17:00 PM)

    Way to totally flip off everyone, jinnius. Poems are like one's personal diary. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/4/2006 8:12:00 AM)

    I like it. The mood is definitely there-nice alliteration, and the short sentences make a nice effect. Good and concise, and it sounds like you which is the point after all. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 1, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 1, 2010

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