Yellow Shack Poem by Logan Murphy

Yellow Shack

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Yellow shack all sunken in,
Resting rust on roof of tin,
Your creaking floors will sing no more
Glad hymn of habitation.

Your tenants rest on yonder shore,
Crossed over mighty Jordan;
Though poor wayfaring strangers here,
At home in that fair land.

The chicken coop is barren now
And garden ground forsaken,
The misty haze of rainy days -
A psalm of meditation

Oh laugh and sing and pick and grin
The songs of Appalachia;
A time long gone, a culture dawned -
The shack in desolation.

Green grass unshorn, my gaze forlorn,
As thieves break in and plunder;
Treasures within your weathered walls
Shall see the sun no longer.

So stoke again the fire within
Your stove, which made of iron,
Did warm the home, the yellow shack,
Which now is sunken in.

Yellow Shack
Thursday, August 31, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: appalachia,death,home,memory,rural,sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm from a small town in southeast Tennessee, and come from very humble Appalachian roots.When both of mymaternal grandparents passed awaywithin the span of about a year,I wanted to process my grief through reflecting on all of the memories that we had at their house, which was a tiny two bedroom shack. For a long time, my grandparents didn't even have indoor plumbing, but used an outhouse in the back yard. The shack was heated by wood stoves, drew water from a well, and had an old tin roof that is rusting over.Our familyused to gatherin this tiny house to celebrate Christmas every year, and I'll never forget the memories of singing and laughing in that cramped living room around the wood stove.My grandparents were simple people,and they inspired and fueled my love for music, particularly bluegrass music. This poemis a tribute to them, a memory of good times, and a somber recognition of the passing of time. In the Yellow Shack,I'm reminded of my own mortalityand the value of savoring every moment with friends and loved ones, as well as the deep impact that physical space makes on us. I don't really consider myself a poet, but this is my first attempt to process these emotions through writing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 31 August 2017

Beautiful nostalgic experience nicely penned in good diction from the heart. Thanks for sharing Logan.

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Logan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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