Thursday, August 31, 2017

Yellow Shack Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yellow shack all sunken in,
Resting rust on roof of tin,
Your creaking floors will sing no more
Glad hymn of habitation.
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Logan Murphy
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Chinedu Dike 31 August 2017

Beautiful nostalgic experience nicely penned in good diction from the heart. Thanks for sharing Logan.

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Logan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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