Yes, I Did Poem by Margarita De Valois

Yes, I Did

Rating: 4.5


You are not the one I need,
You are not.

City slowly fell asleep -
Caught some cold.

They told me that fall had come,
Came alone.

I could take away your pain,
Did u want? ..

I will bring the yellow candle
From a church.

First I thought I'd found something,
That I had searched

Someone ought to have this straight
Might be me.

Fall left marks and spread its paint,
Stole the leaves.

What I say will hurt you, honey,
Hardly hit:

I did love you for a while
Yes, I did.

Tuesday, May 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,break up,depression,hurt,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Translated from the original poem of Sola Monova,2017
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 May 2018

Sad story of love well articulated and expertly penned with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Margarita and do remain enriched.

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