You Poem by Sruthi Sahadevan

You

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As a light you came,
You flooded my life.
I thought I‘ll never find fame,
Until you came in my life.
I was lonely and sad,
You came and led me far.
Without you,
I would have been a failure.
You made me realise,
That life was worth living.
You held my hand gently,
And helped me cross the hurdles.
With your sweet and understanding smile,
You ease my pain.
You are like an ocean of love to me,
A candle’s light which leads me,
I find glee in your company,
Hope you would never leave me.
But, today you have left me
I stand alone in the darkness
I don’t know whether to cry or laugh.
I understand your despair
But can you understand mine?
Can you see the endless tears that I am shedding?
Cos I am all alone without you……….
I have lost my identity...
My everything, my happiness, myself…
I can’t cry anymore……….
Please come back………
It would have been better
If you had rejected me…….
Then dejected me
And left me in the darkness
But now it’s like
There’s no other option
Everything is in the hands
Of God…….
We can only wait and see……….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 August 2009

But now it’s like There’s no other option Everything is in the hands Of God……. We can only wait and see………. God will guide u to destiny andtrust himalways...10 read mine marriage...anywhere...humble submission and prayer...o, lord

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Siddharth Singh 09 August 2009

A lover's cry nicely penned. Good work.

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Ted M 08 August 2009

An emotional piece, which is a part of life. nice write............

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